I stumbled onto their blog, through Akshay’s blog and immediately knew I’d found a treasure. I was still getting over the content on Akshay’s blog, which isn’t half as trivial as he claims, and here I was confronted with a blog of a “motley group of writers” who meet up online and offline, over coffees and conversation to read out their oeuvres and discuss them. I browsed their blog for a few days – leaving comments where I felt I had something worthwhile to say, and then Max Babi contacted me. A founder-member of the group, he was organizing the first-ever Pune Caferati meet – “Would I like to come?” he asked. There was no doubt in my mind that this was something I wanted to do – I am not a great writer, infact I’ve hardly written any stories and can’t write verse for nuts, yet I knew I HAD to attend.
So I went – 7th November 2004, Titash Neogi’s apartment off Spicer College Road – and am I glad I went! I went as an observer, commenting very little, seizing the opportunity to simply soak in the atmosphere and get a feel of what the meetings are all about. I was quite awed (and even inspired) by some of the stuff read out – the talent in these people left me feeling humbled, at the same time it made me realise that I might have something to offer as well…
I attended the Bombay Caferati meet this Sunday (21st November 2004), having gathered the courage to read out something I’d written a year back. Hosted at Gold Mist, in a beautiful apartment, overlooking Jogger’s Park, Bandra and the awe-inspiring Arabian Sea (awe-inspiring the Bombay coastline is, whether it’s because of the degree to which it is polluted, or those huge waves that crash the shore during monsoons!) the meet was a bit disappointing in terms of what was read – most of the pieces read didn’t do much for me. The last item on the agenda – the play reading, by Peter and Vijay – was mind-blowing stuff! “Relaxing” was how one gentleman described it ; I’d say “invigorating”, “spell-binding” and “captivating” – the oratory skills of the two gentlemen who read it out, coupled with the taut, well-bound script made me want more than the two scenes that were read out!
To Life, posted on Literary Mosaic, was my first-ever attempt at fiction writing…as I’ve said myself, it’s a simple story, almost simplistic. An experiment, to see if I’m capable of producing anything worthwhile or am I just full of useless crap that no one will want to read… friends who read it, had stuff to say, but most of it wasn’t constructive criticism that would guide me to improvement. Caferati gave me that – starting with Max, who read my story and encouraged me to read it at the B’bay meet, Manisha, Avi and Peter who critiqued it at the meet and gave me pointers on how to improve the story (rather, make it one!) and Titash, who with his organized little comments, ripped my story apart, giving suggestions on how to improve it…
I have just started my journey with Caferati and have a long way to go – I’m sure as hell looking forward it…it’s going to be one rocking trip!!! :-)
P.S Any more comments on the story are welcome!
11 comments:
Firstly thinks first, I loved the quote to started with
Be slow in choosing a friend but slower in changing him.
Reading your story which I have had to several times in detail in order to comment on.
I firstly liked your choice of location Kerala those the trick it welcome your readers into a cool serene and inviting environment probably as welcoming as an embrace of a friend which goes so well with the theme of your story. The characterizations were good each character had his/her own voice. As for the story I did enjoy reading the story everything mixed quiet well . Ok I’m beginning to sound like some writer’s critic … well I should end my saying the story has a lot of heart and I loved it..
And thank you Gee for introducing me to caferati. :-)
I liked the part when Deb realises that Riya is not who he thinks she is. Everybody's life is so different in so many ways,it is a book in itself, how often dont we all generalize people and not just treat them as individuals and get to really know them before we pass judgements on them ? Why ? Because its easy to do so ?
Also interesting was the notion that the enduring long term love should necessarily take time, its like wine, needs to be fermented enough before it should be tasted :)
Found my way here via caferati.googlegroups or whatever. Nice-ish page!
Have a few poems up on caferati that you might find worth your while (never one to be modest!). Check these out:
http://caferati.blogspot.com/2004/11/interlude.html
http://caferati.blogspot.com/2004/11/disadvantage.html
http://caferati.blogspot.com/2004/11/catullus.html
http://caferati.blogspot.com/2004/10/visitor.html
http://caferati.blogspot.com/2004/11/colour-of-love.html
That's quite a list, I fear. But writers - poets more so - are shameless :)
Thanks Akshay and Anirudh for those comments on the story! :-) (welcome back Anirudh!)
Speckled Band - I've read some of those poems already, since I'm at Caferati almost twice a day, if not more. But since you've 'nicely' provided links I shall go read them once more ;-) Hope to see you again on this blog!
Sree - so when am I going to see YOU on Caferati? ;-)
Don't mean to sound shallow or pompous. Loved the character sketches. Loved the chemistry between the group. (Maybe you could now attempt a story on the individuals - like Zoya n Raoul, or one on Riya?) But I felt the ending came very out-of-the-blue. Maybe there should have been some sort of a build-up to that proposal...? Maybe Annahita's crushes could have been traced out further - to search what she was really loking for, through them, and what she ultimately found in Deb?
Just a thought. Very heart-warming read. ;-)
Thanks for those comments Rahul (Livinghigh) - just visited your blog...oodles of style there boss! ;-) I am so in love with your blog - sp those posts on B'bay!!! Shall probab become a regular visitor there!
Glad you had fun, Gee.
Look forward to seeing and hearing much more of you.
Am now off to read your story properly.
I liked your piece. It is really good for a first attempt. Would love to see more from you ...
Glad you dropped by my humble blog Peter! If you have more to say about my story - your comments are more than welcome!!
A - thanks!
Heyyy..just read your story, pretty good :->, what I liked most was the characterisations, looking forward to more from you and then some...
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